A Solid Start to Your Book


The first three chapters are the most critical when it comes to landing an agent or editor. Your first three chapters need to be perfectly polished and have a hook that draws the reader in and keeps them wanting to turn the page. The pacing, plot, setting, and character development of the first three chapters sets the tone for the entire manuscript. Many (if not most) agents and editors will decide whether they’re interested in reading more based on the first three chapters. This session is designed to help make sure that your first three chapters stand out and leave a lasting impression.


Session includes:

  • A read-through of your first three chapters with editorial feedback on plot, pacing, setting, and character development
  • A basic edit for grammar and style
  • A one-hour interactive review session via Zoom


Note—writers will send their first three chapters for review prior to the Zoom review session.


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$125

First Three Chapters Review Session

Session includes:

  • A read-through of your first three chapters with editorial feedback on plot, pacing, setting, and character development
  • A basic edit for grammar and style
  • A one-hour interactive review session via Zoom


Note—writers will send their first three chapters for review prior to the Zoom review session.

Frequently Asked Questions


Can I get a refund if I'm unhappy with my purchase?

Because of the personalized nature of my coaching, you will be responsible for helping to set expectations up front regarding what we will accomplish with your purchased time. I don't envision a case where you would be unhappy with your own expectations, but things happen. While I will work with you on a refund of unused time when appropriate, any allotment of time already used is not eligible for a refund.


How do I schedule my appointment?

Upon purchasing coaching, you'll receive further instructions on how to book a time for your appointment.


Can I purchase coaching more than once?

Absolutely! If you find yourself in need of additional coaching time, or help with another aspect of your writing, simply purchase the desired coaching package again.