Full Developmental Edit


If you have a completed manuscript and are ready for professional advice, Ellie will provide a full developmental edit. This includes feedback and suggestions on pacing, plot, character development, setting, and dialogue. It also includes a general edit for basic grammar and style.


Session includes:

  • Developmental edit of manuscript
  • 90-minute Zoom session to review feedback and answer questions


Note—writers will send their full manuscript to Ellie for review before the Zoom meeting. Timeframe to be determined based on Ellie’s schedule.

This package is a good match for mystery writers who have a completed manuscript. If you’re looking for feedback on another genre, please reach out to Ellie to see whether she is a match or can refer you to someone else.


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$1,800

One-time Purchase

What's included:

  • Developmental edit of your manuscript
  • A 90-minute Zoom session to review feedback and answer questions


Frequently Asked Questions


Can I get a refund if I'm unhappy with my purchase?

Because of the personalized nature of my coaching, you will be responsible for helping to set expectations up front regarding what we will accomplish with your purchased time. I don't envision a case where you would be unhappy based on your expectations, but things happen. While I will work with you to refund unused time when appropriate, any allotment of time already used is not eligible for a refund.



How do I schedule my appointment?

Upon purchasing coaching, you'll receive further instructions on how to book a time for your appointment.



Can I purchase coaching more than once?

Absolutely! If you need additional coaching time or help with another aspect of your writing, simply purchase the desired coaching package again.